Rebecca's Devil Fruit and Abilities

[REBECCA D. HAWKINS]

TECHNIQUE NAME:
Nikyu Nikyu no Mi [Paw Paw Fruit]

DESCRIPTION:

Due to eating the Nyku Nyku no Mi, it has granted Rebecca the ability to repel anything that she touches. The physical manifestation is located around her hands as they have been permanently engraved with paws around her palms. So long as she touches it Rebecca can push virtually anything she touches regardless if it’s tangible, intangible, physical and or non-physical at extremely high speeds. Thus, Rebecca can deflect and repel any attack that comes to her through contact or by repelling the air around her like a paw shaped shield. However, this ability isn’t just purely defensive as Rebecca can use the fruit’s power of repelling for other methods such as offensive purposes, physical augmentations, agility and speed movement as this fruit can be used to affect Rebecca too if she wanted to, etc. Whatever is repelled will suffer such intense powerful kinetic forces/knockback that it leaves paw-shaped imprints upon them including stuff like rocks or steel.

One of the few sub branches of this fruit is teleportation. The eater of the fruit can actually teleport anything or anyone through repelling them. This repelling is different considering that whatever is repelled through this method is shielded within a paw shaped barrier/bubble. This bubble will protect whatever it’s covering from the inside from anything that comes into contact through them and repel it away. This includes any and all obstacles in their path. The bubble will last for three days and nights until they reach their destination. Rebecca has full rein of where they will end up and once they reach that destination the bubble will explode upon contact. This explosion will not harm whatever is inside but it does leave an enormous paw shaped print upon landing.

Currently Rebecca has only obtained the ability of pushing what her hand and feet are touching for repelling and acceleration purposes. In addition she can only do it with tangible or intangible substances within her hand’s reach. Everything else is currently locked and beyond her ability to do so.

DRAWBACKS:

The first drawback is that by eating the fruit Rebecca is no longer able to swim. This means that if she is at least submerged in water then her body will paralyze and make her unable to move until she is out of the water. Another drawback is that while Rebecca is capable of repelling anything actual attacks would require the need of hands to deflect them. Thus, if both of her hands are currently occupied than she cannot repel anything else until those hands are no longer occupied. And she will take damage from attacks that normally she could counter with her fruit. Another note is while repelling one of her hands will light up signaling that she is currently using that hand. Meaning that currently she can only repel only twice at the same time.

COST: Free due to winning it in a event

TECHNIQUE NAME: Shōgekiyubi [Shocking Finger, Nikyu Nikyu no mi tech]
LEVEL: One
ATTRIBUTE: Power and Agility
DESCRIPTION:

This ability in turn allows Rebecca to create strong shockwave pushes similar to a pressurized air cannon or a large beam. This can be done either by focusing and locking on to a target with her hands and firing a beam, or achieving it through the second method by physical contact with a punch or a kick. It will deal minor damage to everything a straight line of ten meters as well as minor knockback by five meters. This ability can only go through a single direction and using physical contact puts Rebecca in a slight risk of getting damaged. This tech has a single post cool time and can currently only be done with one limb separate or two limbs together.

PRICE: Free Tech Slot Number 1

TECHNIQUE NAME:
Kasokusokka [Acceleration Step, Nikyu Nikyu no mi tech]
LEVEL: One
ATTRIBUTE: Agility and Power
DESCRIPTION:

By compressing and repelling the air around her, Rebecca can accelerate her body. How it functions and its properties are similar to Geppo and Soru. She can currently travel up to ten meters and travels at five meters per second. Her body is shielded from moving at such speeds and suffering fall damage due to the paw barrier. Currently she cannot make turns without losing speed or stopping the technique altogether. This ability has a cool down of two posts currently before usage again. It’s also wise for her to take an additional post in order to not suffer any strains or damage upon using this technique. The target point cannot be interrupted during usage otherwise it will either not work or Rebecca will be sent off into a completely random direction without her control and suffer damage from it.

PRICE: Free Tech Slot Number 2

Reserving third tech slot for future use.

Note: I was approved of these techs before and now I'm re-registering them under the new format.

[DAEMON]

HOLDUP;

Your techniques are way too powerful for level one techniques. Please refer to this thread to make your changes. Starter techniques cannot be devil fruit techniques, you will need to buy those. Thanks.

EDIT; the things I would like you to change are specifics such as distance, speed, and levels of damage and efficiency. Level one techniques are supposed to be the basic ones.

[REBECCA D. HAWKINS]

changes have been made

[DAEMON]

HOLDUP;

The first technique need to be reduced significantly in strength if you're going to use it passively. Otherwise I'm going to say that it has no effects other than to let you use 'paw paw' techniques. Shogekiyubi, needs to be reduced to the force of a strong push. Not hitting like a hammer, and no internal damage. I can kill someone if i hit them with a hammer. There also needs to be some preparation, such as aiming with the users hand before sending out a shock wave. As for Kasokusokka there should be a total duration time of two posts, and keep the cool-down. I also strongly suggest that you summarize it more efficiently, because its a hassle to overlook, especially in battle scenarios. I like the detail, but it would be very helpful if you did. Thanks

[REBECCA D. HAWKINS]

Well by first tech do you mean the devil fruit. If so I was just describing the fruit's abilities. But if I have to actually give a estimate of what she can currently do I would say the basic pushing with her hands. Actual repelling through any means but the hand, augmentations and the teleportation part of it is currently locked until she upgrades said fruit.

As for the two techniques, are you asking me to trim down the abilities to that of a few sentences or bullet points ? Because I could have add a section for that with a spoiler tag but If I must I will shortly.

[DAEMON]

HOLDUP;

For the devil fruit I would specify whats within your ability currently. Like you said, pushes with the hands and such.

Yes, it would be great if you could trim down the amount of text. Three-hundred words for a description is a bit much, as some people's posts are not that long. It's not set up to be reviewed in a timely member, I'm just asking so that it will be easier on both staff and other members.

[REBECCA D. HAWKINS]

Done

[DAEMON]

ACCEPTED;

Thanks for your cooperation :]