CKRY D. ARQUE
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i will beat you the fuck up.
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Post by CKRY D. ARQUE on Mar 7, 2012 13:00:53 GMT -5
NAUFRAGIO LEVEL: 1 ATTRIBUTE: Spirit DESCRIPTION: Through sheer force of will, the user's determination and fighting spirit are manifest as their capability to defend from attack is no longer dependent on taking a specific stance or evasive actions. Naugragio, translating to 'cast away' is able to defend from low level attacks effectively with mental fortitude alone, increasing the user's resistance to injury the moment an attack hits, tensing their muscles, reinforcing their power, and shrugging off small amounts of pain as if no attack ever occurred. This can make it briefly appear as if the user is 'invincible' as they give no outward sign that they've even noticed an attack happening. This technique is activated through instinct, designed for split-second utilization, but can still only be performed one time per post, for each level of the associated attribute(s) the user possesses. Can only be used three times per thread. PRICE: Free
GIRAR LEVEL: 1 ATTRIBUTE: Spirit DESCRIPTION: Through sheer force of will, the user's determination and fighting spirit are manifest as their capability to attack is augmented. Girar, meaning 'revolve', is a spinning attack where two blades are utilized to attack and defend simultaneously. The users body revolves like a top with a burst of their own internal energies, their mental dexterity propelling them, completing one full revolution per second, with both blades extended to slice/cut and defend against basic attacks/technique of equivalent level. For every full turn (roughly five second interval) that Girar is used, it requires two full turns of rest before it can be utilized again, during which, the user will experience dizziness for one post. Can only be used three times per thread. PRICE: Free
CIELO DE TIJERA FRIA LEVEL: 1 ATTRIBUTE: Spirit DESCRIPTION: Through sheer force of will, the user's determination and fighting spirit are manifest as their capability to attack is augmented. The techniques name translates roughly to "cold scissor sky", and allows the user to push their body to the brink in one great burst of focus to attack twice in a single movement. In keeping with its name, this attack must be done by using two bladed weapons, as the attack causes the user to slash with both arms simultaneously, in effect, 'scissoring' an opponents body. This technique can only be performed one time per post, for each level of the associated attribute(s) the user possesses. As this is a physically taxing move, after more than one use, the user experiences fatigue. Can only be used three times per thread. PRICE: Free
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Post by DAEMON on Mar 7, 2012 14:27:11 GMT -5
HOLDUP;Naufragio is an efficient use of spirit, and I like it quite a bit. Just need you to reduce the number of uses per thread to three. Girar should only be able to defend against basic attacks or one technique of equivalent level. The cool-down should be two posts, an after effect being dizziness the post following its use. Reduce the number of uses to three per thread. Cielo De Tijera Fria needs to incorporate a drawback such as fatigue or slowed movements have each use. Remove the wave portion of it, and reduce the number of uses to three.
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CKRY D. ARQUE
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i will beat you the fuck up.
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Post by CKRY D. ARQUE on Mar 7, 2012 23:31:25 GMT -5
Nerfing complete.
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Post by DAEMON on Mar 8, 2012 13:33:59 GMT -5
APPROVED!Go fuck shit up:)
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