MINAKO MINAMI
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Can I kill you, please~?
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Post by MINAKO MINAMI on Mar 8, 2012 4:05:05 GMT -5
TECHNIQUE NAME:Unyielding Sword LEVEL: 1 ATTRIBUTE:Spirit DESCRIPTION:Unyielding Sword raises Minako's Power one level for two posts whenever a Marine is attacked within 10M of Minako. Attacks received during the two post duration hurt 1.5x as much. When attacked, Minako attempts to counter immediately after being attacked, doubling the damage received/blocked. After the two post duration, this technique needs to cool down for two posts. PRICE: Free
TECHNIQUE NAME:Undying Will LEVEL: 1 ATTRIBUTE:Spirit DESCRIPTION: Whenever Minako is overcome by emotions or losing in a conflict, her Undying Will will kick in. For one post, Minako's attributes are raised by one level in order to end the battle. After that posts, she becomes weakened decreasing her stamina twice the amount of her actions during the the post. Damage received is felt on the turn after activation. This ability can only be used once per thread. PRICE: Free
TECHNIQUE NAME:Unconquerable Princess LEVEL: 1 ATTRIBUTE:Spirit DESCRIPTION: Minako is often quite insane, on and off the battlefield. When this ability is activated, for two posts Minako gives into her madness, causing her attacks to become wild and unpredictable during the duration.After the two posts, this ability needs to cool down for two posts. During one of these two posts, Minako becomes quite passive, allowing for no attacks to be made. PRICE: Free
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Post by DAEMON on Mar 8, 2012 14:00:15 GMT -5
HOLDUP;Unyielding Sword - Remove the portion that states that she can instantly dash in front of them. I'll allow for increased fighting spirit that increases the power of her attack, but you need to include a drawback following the use of this technique, as well as a cooldown period before it can be used again.
Undying Will - Reduce the duration of this technique to one post for now, since you are increasing your all around fighting abilities. You also need to include that any damage taken during this period will fully affect her after her increased will dies out.
Unnerving Glare - I'm going to ask that you change this to something else. This treads to closely along the line of Conquerors Haki, which is earned through participating in events and roleplaying actively. Thanks~
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MINAKO MINAMI
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Can I kill you, please~?
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Post by MINAKO MINAMI on Mar 8, 2012 14:31:25 GMT -5
Edits made as requested for the first two, new ability on the third power added.
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Post by DAEMON on Mar 8, 2012 14:35:31 GMT -5
ACCEPTED!Go catch some pesky pirates~
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