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Post by Lyon Del Crepuscolo on Mar 25, 2012 5:27:44 GMT -5
LYON "DAWN". DEL. CREPUSCOLO 19 • MALE • UNDISCLOSED • 5'11 • 135LBS OHARA • HUMAN • PIRATE • SWORDSMAN • DE
Con Te Partiro. It's Time To Say GoodBye ________________________________________
[/font] • appearance[/font] i1109.photobucket.com/albums/h432/Hakudoshi7/Lyon-2.jpgi1109.photobucket.com/albums/h432/Hakudoshi7/lyon12-1.jpg The older and much more mature teen holds no flashy important physical features except for his piercing and serene eyes. Growing up in the north blue Lyon's skin complexion is a tad bit litter than most. Keeping his yellow topaz eyes in complete unison with his attire, letting his blond hair attune the people he meets to the typical stereotypes. Despite he acts completely different from what people say, Lyon's slender body and natural agileness, makes it hard for his opponents to not only get a hold on him but also to land a direct hit. • personality[/font] Mature:Despite his age, Lyon tends to act as if he is actually an older 20 year old man. As if he was hitting his thirties, Lyon talks about the "younger generation" (like its not his own generation) and waits and listens for the proper honorifics to come from those younger than him. With this trait, Lyon is also a killer when it comes to detail and specifics. From the smallest spec of fibre, to the largest flea, Lyon notices them all and makes notes as well as plans accordingly. Selflessness:Lyon is a giver. To aid those who are in need with all his mind body and soul, Lyon wishes to bring a calm to everybody's face, like the rising sun across the world. Once, the memory forever trapped within his mind lives the moment, that because of his personality he gave his body. Depending on character development, this can easily be twisted into "giving" people an easy way out of this cruel world that they live in, or "helping those in pain escape it." Passive: Not a pusher, Lyon has and is one to take the backseat in all situations. Waiting to receive orders like a good vassal, Lyon follows those orders to their fullest, and to the best of his ability. At this moment, he looks for the perfect person to serve, will all his effort. Respectful: Regardless of their background, Lyon spends every penny being as respectful as he possibly can to many others. From Marines, to other pirates, to his elders. All pause and wonder why he bothers, since he is after all a pirate. SociableConversing with, and sparing none a proper conversation, Lyon talks and shares stories with all. No one gets half changed when it comes to making conversation with Lyon. It'd be best if you simply ran away.... • weaponry[/font] Tenchi Sōzō - The Creation of Heaven and Earth At a surprising 68inches, Lyon's odachi's size alone tends to either strike fear or opportunity into the eyes of his enemies. What most do not know however, is the speed at which Lyon is capable of drawing his long sword. Kept in its sheath made out of a sea-prism stone, on his left side, Lyon at times does not even bother to draw his sword, using the metallic sheath to block as well as bash and break his opponents down. Able to take on several opponents at the same time, Lyon's grace and skill is what has given him what little fame he has on the battlefield.
• accessories[/font] - Normal Den Den Mushi x1
- Whetstone x1
- Journal x1
- Wallet x1
- Pen x1
- Map(with the places he's been marked) x1
- Handkerchief x1
Shiki, Mutou Toru
________________________________________ THIS CHARACTER WAS MADE BY HAKUDOSHI [/size][/blockquote][/justify][/size][/blockquote]
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Post by Lyon Del Crepuscolo on Mar 31, 2012 1:41:58 GMT -5
• power LEVEL ONE - At this level, your strength is average, if not subpar. You are able to lift your own weight, but can only throw half of it. Physical attacks dealt lack real power, causing bruising with blunt weapons and shallow slashes with blades. With average strength, a person cannot break through much of anything, save for a wooden door or the such when body mass is applied.
• stamina LEVEL ONE - At this level, a person's endurance is average, and they have a low threshold for pain. They often don't last more than a few minutes in a fight, and grow sluggish as combat ensues and more damage is dealt. With an ordinary level of stamina, they have little resistance to elements and the such.
• agility LEVEL ONE - At this level, a person has average speed and reaction time. They are able to run at 6.7 meters per second in short bursts, and have a reaction time capable of evading melee attacks and some ranged ones, assuming the ranged attack has the proper accuracy. Like most people feints are somewhat easy to read, and sword strikes can be followed without a lot of issue.
• accuracy LEVEL TWO - At this level a person's accuracy is above average, and they can keep track of movements of above average speed. Their timing is noticeably better, and they might have a better understanding of weak points. Things such as major arteries, or tendons are reasonable. The range of a person's accuracy at this level is no less than twenty-five meters, anything outside of that rarely hits successfully.
• intelligence LEVEL ONE - With an average intelligence, a person is unable to learn navigational or medical skills. At most they might be able to follow a treasure map, or put a bandage on an injury. A person with this level of intelligence is far from inventing, and usually does create new tools or uses for existing ones.
• spirit LEVEL ONE - At this level, a person has an average fighting spirit, and really gains no boost from their determination to win. Not to say that they easily give up, but they do not have the will power, or spirit, to overcome challenges that prove too difficult. At this level, a person is unable to obtain conqueror's haki.
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Post by FLOU on Mar 31, 2012 6:06:32 GMT -5
✘ HOLD UP ✘ ▶ ICONSDo note that we expect you to have 3 icons positioned beside each other, as seen in the character template thread. They have to be the same icon, and also, it has to be 100x100. Your icon, unfortunately, is 100x103. ▶ LYRICSSee those two lines under the icons, then? All caps, please. That was how it was in the character template thread, and that is how it should be. ▶ PERSONALITYThe character template stated that the personality has to be balanced. What this means is that there have to be at least an equal number of positive and negative traits about one's individuality. Mature is a positive trait. Selflessness is considered a positive trait, and by your description, I will go for positive. Passive can go negative. Respectful and Sociable is then positive. So, by proper judgement, you have 4 positives and 1 negative. Balance this out. This can't be all your character is, right? ▶ FACE CLAIMThe source should be in capital letters, and the name in small caps, like so, "SHIKI, motou toru". ▶ ATTRIBUTES/TECHNIQUESPlease remove the '~fixed~' located at the bottom of the techniques. Do note that a bio is supposed to have the main bio section, the attribute section, and the technique section lined out in order, without any posts between them. So, if you are asked to change something, change it from there. Do note that Laz told you to post the technique post as well. The only thing he said was that you are to leave it as it was from the character template. Empty. Cause it will then be filled up later on by us once you have properly purchased techniques. Do not worry. These grading posts will be deleted upon approval.
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