ANABELL
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Post by ANABELL on Mar 18, 2012 1:26:03 GMT -5
doa doa - door door
LEVEL: 1
ATTRIBUTE: devil fruit
DESCRIPTION: utilizing the ability of her doa doa no mi, anabell can create a door on any solid surface of her choosing. these doors can be used to escape attackers, or to gain an upper hand in surprise.
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ea doa - air door
LEVEL: 1
ATTRIBUTE: devil fruit
DESCRIPTION: utilizing the doa doa no mi, anabell has the ability to create doors through the very atmosphere itself. this is ideal for stealth purposes, since this dimension not only allows the user and anyone else to travel across vast distances, but also provides a safe haven for them to stay in from which they can either observe and ambush enemies from, or survive through large scale attacks. its only downside is that while inside this pocketed dimension, the user has no means to interact with the real world other than to exit first to return themselves back there. at this level, anabell can only travel up to ten meters within a single door.
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winter’s bone
LEVEL: 1
ATTRIBUTE: Speed / Spirit
DESCRIPTION: wielding her giant saw, anabell can inflict a high amount of damage with a single slash of her weapon. with this ability, she temporarily gains a boost to her speed stat (1 level for a single attack), aiming to catch her opponent off guard with the newly gained swiftness. at this level, the saw is capable of shallow, but painful cuts with only the ability to slice through cartilage cleanly. after use, this attack must cool down for 4 posts before it may be used again.
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Post by DAEMON on Mar 18, 2012 18:38:34 GMT -5
HOLDUP;spring - this is very vague in its use. a technique supposed to be specific to their actions. it would also seem like more of an inteligence/accuracy based technique. explain the specific use of this technique, it's not really supposed to have a supplementary effect.
summer - again, this needs a more specific use.
autumn - well considering your syringes are listed as accessories, they can't be used for combat purposes. trade this out for something else, maybe that of a medical purpose. |
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ANABELL
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Post by ANABELL on Mar 21, 2012 19:33:43 GMT -5
HOLDUP;spring - this is very vague in its use. a technique supposed to be specific to their actions. it would also seem like more of an inteligence/accuracy based technique. explain the specific use of this technique, it's not really supposed to have a supplementary effect.
summer - again, this needs a more specific use.
autumn - well considering your syringes are listed as accessories, they can't be used for combat purposes. trade this out for something else, maybe that of a medical purpose. hey there!
after some consultation i have re-done all 3 techniques, sorry for the vagueness of the previous ones! |
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Post by DAEMON on Mar 21, 2012 22:35:23 GMT -5
Triage of Spring - this shouldn't be able to heal large wounds in its current state. remove that.
midsummer bounty - im going to say no to the paralysis at this level. change it to something with the nature of slowed movements to the affected area.
winter's bone - reduce the depth of cuts to a minor measurement.
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ANABELL
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Post by ANABELL on Mar 28, 2012 14:16:11 GMT -5
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Post by DAEMON on Mar 28, 2012 15:39:08 GMT -5
Air Door - place a range of ten meters from the point of origin. Meaning you can only use this passage way to travel up to ten meters.
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Post by ANABELL on Mar 28, 2012 16:28:20 GMT -5
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Post by DAEMON on Mar 29, 2012 17:42:57 GMT -5
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