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Post by KIM JAEWON on Apr 12, 2012 18:56:47 GMT -5
TECHNIQUE NAME: Delta Strike LEVEL: 1 ATTRIBUTE: Spirit DESCRIPTION: Jae has to concentrate on his target first and must be on a stable surface before executing the move. When he's ready, he dashes towards his target/opponent and slices three times to form an upside down triangle. Using his spirit, he can create small bursts of speed (1 max. per use). However, he will get exhausted twice as fast if he does so. Cooldown is 2 posts without using boost, 4 posts with boost. PRICE: 1st free
TECHNIQUE NAME: Dark Trade LEVEL: 1 ATTRIBUTE: Spirit DESCRIPTION: Jae can tap into his brain and see his senses like levers. By "turning it off," or giving up a sense like sight, or even "pulling down a bit," or dulling it a bit, can enhance the other senses. For example, by giving up sight, he can smell the faintest of perfumes in a room full of poop and he can feel the air around him to feel the nearby items. He can choose to become blind to enhance his other senses greatly, or just make everything look blurry to give his other senses a small boost. However, he can only "switch" one sense at a time at this level and it only lasts 3 posts. The cooldown is 3 posts after the technique has been cancelled. Currently, only his sight or scent can be sacrificed and only one of them can be sacrificed at a time. Scent is increase if sight is sacrificed and vice versa. PRICE: 2nd free
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Post by ZZZ on Apr 12, 2012 21:06:45 GMT -5
✘ ALMOST! BUT... ✘ ▶ Delta Strike This is too powerful for a level 1 technique. Please lower the speed boost. Also, this technique has nothing to do with strength currently, please adjust the attributes accordingly.
▶ Dark TradeThis needs to go into much deeper detail. It also needs a time limit, a cool down time, and a limit to which sense it can affect.
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Post by KIM JAEWON on Apr 13, 2012 7:39:33 GMT -5
Alright, changed it up.
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Post by m2 on Apr 15, 2012 14:12:14 GMT -5
Delta Strike
Give Delta Strike a cooldown, and as a level one speed boost tech, the going rate is one boost per use.
Dark Trade
At this level, boosting one sense by giving up one is the limit. Please choose one specific sense to boost until later levels.
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Post by m2 on Apr 15, 2012 14:39:01 GMT -5
Approved.
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